Western Reserve Writers Conference 2019

Western Reserve Writers Conference

Introduction

I attended the 36th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference on April 27, 2019. They held the Conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch of the Cuyahoga County Public Library at the William N. Skirball writer’s center at the branch. It was a one-day event with an introduction, a keynote speaker, three breakout sessions and one first page critique panel.

This is the link to the Cuyahoga County Library.

https://www.cuyahogalibrary.org/

This is the link to the writer’s center at the library branch.

https://www.cuyahogalibrary.org/Services/William-N-Skirball-Writers-Center.aspx

Summary

Saturday, April 27th at 9:30 AM

Welcome and Conference Overview

Deanna R. Adams is the conference coordinator and Laurie Kincer is the librarian in charge of the writer’s center.

Laurie explained how the library was set up, where the three meeting rooms were located, and about the door prizes available at 4 PM. Deanna gave an inspiring quote to the attendees. “This is the first day in the rest of your writing lives.” Deanna introduced the keynote speaker, David Giffels.

They held the welcome and conference overview in the meeting room A/B/C with about 150 attendees.

Saturday, April 27th at 9:40 AM

Keynote Speaker: On writing when you think you have no ideas.

The keynote speaker was David Giffels. He is the writer in residence at the writing center.

David is the author of five books, a magazine author, and a professor of English at Akron University. He began his writing career as a columnist for the Akron Beacon Journal where he wrote three columns a week, every week.

He related three anecdotes about times he thought he had no ideas. On clean out your refrigerator day one time, he went to an Akron University fraternity and came up with a humorous story involving the student he encountered there. One December he walked in downtown Akron. The only place open had an appropriate Christmas display in the windows. It was an Adult store. He asked the clerk if the display was ironic and David wrote a column about his experience. The day of the big East Coast Blackout of 2003, he knew he couldn’t do a big perspective story, so he went out in the street. He found that people chose to make order out of the chaos and wrote a column on that.

The bottom line is to go out into the world to find ideas. Ideas don’t come to us, we get to them.

He talked about the writing prompts he gives to his students at Akron University.

Writing is a transaction from the writer to the reader. The writer gets ideas from the world, mixes the ideas in the writer’s mind, and returns the written word to the world.

Link to his website.

https://www.davidgiffels.com/

They held the talk in the meeting room A/B/C with about 150 attendees.

Saturday, April 27th at 10:30 AM

Breakout Session

Kiss, Marry, Kill: How to create compelling characters, a presentation by Bree Barton

First drafts are character drafts. The writer must figure out who they are, what they want, and what they’ll do to get it. She divided her presentation into six sections with writing exercises attached to help writers understand their characters.

  1. Put some flesh on their bones–Give your characters a job interview. Exercise: Haters gonna hate. What does your character hate?
  2. Give them secrets–Exercise: What secret is your character keeping?
  3. Free their natural voice–Each character needs a unique voice. Exercise: Finish this statement. I wish you would give me…
  4. Shut them up–Exercise: cut dialog so the reader can fill in the gaps.
  5. Describe–Exercise: Describe your characters.
  6. Hats off to you–Exercise: write a scene between two characters who do not meet in the story. It will help to understand the characters.

We did the first three exercises but did not do the other three because of limited time. The techniques were useful for learning about characters.

Link to her website.

http://www.breebarton.com/

They held the talk in the Writer’s Center Meeting Room with 54 attendees. Every seat was full.

Saturday, April 27th at 3:00 PM

Breakout Session

The Art of the Short Story, a presentation by Scott Lax

Scott started with a Q and A session first so he could cover questions attendees had as he progressed through the presentation. Then he explained his path to writing. He stressed that every writer has to find their own journey. Take your route to become a writer by your way, however it works for you. He was a salesman who at 39 decided to do what he had always wanted to do, be a writer. He wrote a novel, wrote a memoir, wrote a screenplay, and many short stories. Then he became a professor at the Cleveland Institute of Art by teaching writing. A short story has story truth, and a memoir has happening truth, that is the difference.

There are three structural elements of a short story.

  1. Unity of action. Place the story in a single space.
  2. Unity of time. The story should take place over a short period of time.
  3. Unity of plot. The story has an organization of events

The story’s conflict comes from something; characters, internal struggle, society, or nature. Start the conflict at once. Set your characters into motion. Create conflict through dialog. Give each of your characters different scripts and motivations. You make short stories with scenes. State the conflict. No time for exposition, get to the point. The climax is when the tension is highest. Objects have emotions, be sure to add them into your stories. Don’t give too much explanation to the reader, be sure to write for smart people.

Link to his website.

http://www.scottlax.com/

They held the talk in the Writer’s Center Meeting Room with 45 attendees.

Recommendation – Conclusion

The Western Reserve Writers Conference was well run, diverse in the presentations offered, and informative. At 4 PM they gave out door prizes. They drew ticket 159 which I had, and I took my  choice of prizes. I chose a signed copy of Dawn by J. Thorn and Zak Bohannon. I missed J. Thorn’s presentation, but I have seen him talk before at science fiction conventions, so I wanted to check out his book. My Star of the Con was Bree Barton. Her presentation was fun, the exercises were useful, and I liked her personality. I plan to attend this event next year.

This is a link for the Goodreads page for Dawn, the door prize I won at the conference.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/35007716-dawn

Links

I attended the 34th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference on September 23, 2017. I could not attend last year. This is a link to my review of the 2017 conference.

The most recent SF conference I attended was Cleveland ConCoction 2019 at 600 North Aurora Road Aurora, Ohio at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 1 to 3, 2019. This is a link to my conference recap.

One Word Kill by Mark Lawrence

Introduction

One Word Kill by Mark Lawrence is the first book in the Impossible Times Trilogy. Nick Hayes enjoys playing Dungeons and Dragons (D & D) with his friends. The novel takes place in January 1986 in London, England. Nick has problems. They diagnosed him with leukemia and he likes the new girl in his D & D group, Mia, but a mysterious stranger arrives and turns his life upside down. Can Nick figure out his next move? His life and future depend on him making the right choice.

Summary

Nick friends are in his D & D group. They are Elton (the dungeon master), John (the warrior), Simon (the thief), Nick is the mage, and Mia is a priest in the group. Nick starts his chemotherapy for leukemia and thinks about his mortality. Demus is the mysterious stranger that wants Nick and Mia to do a dangerous task for him. Nick and Mia need the special talents of the kids in their group. John is wealthy, Simon is a skilled computer hacker, and Elton has a way to break into a computer facility The story is complicated by what the drug dealer Sacks wants and what the psychopath Rust wants from them.

Recommendation

I wasn’t sure where this novel was going because the cliched use of amnesia seemed unlikely. The thrilling ending saves the novel by connecting it all together. With the nostalgia angle, I thought this short novel would be more like Ready Player One, but it was not. One Word Kill is a time travel novel. It explores time travel, destiny, and paradox. I thought it interesting that the Goodreads readers shelved it as 144 Fantasy and 103 Science Fiction. In my experience, time travel was known as Science Fiction. Is this a changing of genres? What changed to make this story fantasy? Maybe readers shelved this novel as fantasy because they know Mark Lawrence as a fantasy author.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of One Word Kill by Mark Lawrence.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/39792427-one-word-kill

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Limited Wish by Mark Lawrence. Book 2 of the Impossible Times Trilogy.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/41771517-limited-wish

A similar book that uses a knowledge of the 80s a critical part of the plot is Ready Player One by Ernest Cline.

This is the link to my review of Ready Player One by Ernest Cline.

Redshirts by John Scalzi

Introduction

Redshirts by John Scalzi starts with Ensign Andrew Dahl assigned to the Universal Union’s flagship, the starship Intrepid. He works in the Xenobiology department and his coworkers advise him not to go on away missions with the officers of the starship. Crewmembers on away missions who are not officers are dying at an alarming rate. Dahl must discover the unbelievable truth, or he will die like the other Redshirts.

Summary

Andrew Dahl connects with a group of new crewmen on the Intrepid. His group includes Maia Duvall who transferred from her last post, his rich friend Jimmy Hanson, a suspected ‘fungus’ dealer Finn, and the mysterious Hester. They learn not to go on away missions with the ship’s officers or risk death. The officers to watch are the Intrepid’s Captain Abernathy, chief science officer Q’eeng, astrogator Kerensky, medical chief Hartnell, and chief engineer West. The key to the mystery is finding the missing crewman Jenkins. The story is connected to the original Star Trek TV show. They must discover the nature of what Dahl’s coworkers call the sacrificial effect and another effect called the Narrative. Shenanigans ensue and the conclusion arrives to complete Dahl’s story. There are three codas that are from different viewpoint characters that finish the theme of the story.

Recommendation

Redshirts by John Scalzi is a great novel. It’s funny, has an unusual premise, and moves quickly to the conclusion. The novel is sneaky because the humor overshadows a great theme. The three codas bring home the theme of making your own reality. There is a first-person coda and a second person coda. The third person coda ties up the themes explored in the novel and the final image ends the novel perfectly. I like that there is no sequel because the end says it all.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page for Redshirts by John Scalzi

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/13055592-redshirts

The following links are for my reviews of other John Scalzi books.

This is a link to my book review of The Consuming Fire by John Scalzi, Book 2 of the Interdependency Sequence.

This is a link to my book review of The Collapsing Empire by John Scalzi, Book 1 of the Interdependency Sequence

This is a link to my book review of the Dispatcher by John Scalzi, Book #1 of the Dispatcher Series.

Broken Eye by Brent Weeks

Broken Eye by Brent Weeks

Introduction

Broken Eye by Brent Weeks is the third book of The Lightbringer series. This novel follows the exciting events detailed in Burning Knife, the second book in the series. The four main narrators are Gavin, the current Prism who has lost his powers, Kip, Gavin’s son, and a Blackguard trainee, Teia, Kip’s friend and a Blackguard trainee (and Kip’s slave, but that is another story), and Karris White Oak, Gavin’s wife (she is also a former Blackguard and The White’s assistant. The White is the leader of the spy corps of the Chromeria). These four characters have important tasks to carry out in the war against the Color Prince and a shadowy group of assassins named the Order of the Broken Eye. If they fail in their missions, then the colors will become unbalanced and they risk the destruction of their world.

Summary Background

Chromaturgy is the magical system of the Seven Satrapies. They call magicians who use Chromaturgy drafters and the best drafters live on the Chromeria, the seat of the Satrapies government. Drafters can take a part of the spectrum of light and make a substance called luxin. They can shape luxin into items, with the color of the luxin determining the properties of the item. Most drafters can draft one or two colors while the Prism can draft all the colors. There is only one Prism alive at one time and the Prism is the military, spiritual, and political leader of the Satrapies.

Summary Plot

Gavin is the Prism, but he had lost his powers. He is a galley slave under Captain Gunner and Gavin searches for a way to escape. Kip is a Blackguard trainee but is being coerced and groomed by his grandfather Andross to do Andross’s bidding as the potential next Prism. Kip is conflicted with his feelings for Andross. He is also conflicted with his feelings for Teia, who is his friend, comrade, and a reluctant slave who he would like to become romantically involved. This plot becomes more complicated when Tisis is interested in getting to know Kip physically and Kip finds he is also interested in her. Events get beyond Kip’s control and he must try to escape the Chromeria before someone assassinates him. Teia is tasked by the White to infiltrate the secret Order of the Broken Eye. It is a dangerous mission complicated by her interaction with the assassin named Murder Sharp. Kariss White Oak assists the White by gaining intelligence about the Color Prince’s rebellion.

Meanwhile, the Color Prince has been marshaling his land forces beginning an invasion of the Blood Forest which is one step from the Chromeria. The main characters must become involved in defeating him before he becomes too strong.

Recommendation

The story of the Lightbringer series gets more complicated and interesting in this novel. This novel is a part of the larger series. The author resolves plot points from book 2 and the author introduce others to be explored in the next book. The four main characters are well drawn. The author pushes their arcs in this novel to a climactic confrontation at the Chromeria. There were other viewpoint chapters in the novel, but I believe those chapters were unnecessary though they were well written. It would take more space to develop more than the four main characters. The next novel in the series is named the Blood Mirror and I will read it this year. The last novel in the series is named the Burning White and is scheduled to be published on October 22, 2019.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Broken Eye by Brent Weeks.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12652457-the-broken-eye

This is the link to my review of the Blinding Knife by Brent Weeks.

This is the link to my review of Black Prism by Brent Weeks.

Writing Progress Report for April 2019

This is my Writing Progress Report for April 2019.

The Hard Rocksino changes its name to MGM Northfield Park on April 4, 2019, but the sign is already up. I’m excited.

Writing Progress from March 2019

I wrote five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my writing report for March 2019 linked below.

I bought and used the editing program Pro Writing Aid to edit the novel, Assassin in New Marl City. I edited and typed Assassin Chapters 30, 32, and 33 in August 2018. I reviewed Chapters 34, 35, and 36 in September and I completed the review in February. Chapters 1 to 14 were reviewed by using Pro Writing Aid and submitted to my novel writing class.

The first draft of Assassin in New Marl City was complete at 99,981 words in July 2018. I completed draft two in December 2018 at 89,072 words. Third draft edits have not been started.

I submitted a story called Through Time and Space with Ferdinand Feghoot – GG to the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I submitted the second draft edit of Chapter 14 of Assassin to the Advanced Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

The stories 4 Humours, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, Get to the Point, and LARP Film Noir have been submitted to magazines.

Statistics of magazine submissions for 2019 are; 1 different story submitted a total of 1 time with 0 accepted, 1 pending, and 0 rejections.

Events from March 2019

I attended the SF con, ConCoction in Cleveland Ohio March 1 to 3, 2019.

This is a link to the ConCoction website.

http://www.clevelandconcoction.org/

This is my post on Cleveland ConCoction 2019.

Writing Goals for April 2019

I plan to write four blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my Writing Progress Report for April 2019.

I plan to work on second draft edits for Chapters 15 to 30 of Assassin in New Marl City using Pro Writing Aid.

I plan to work on third draft edits for Chapters 1 to 14 of Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Advanced Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio.

Polish and submit the stories Sleeping Sickness, Space-Dog Confession, White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

Submit 4 Humours, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, and LARP Film Noir to other short fiction magazines.

Edit Searcher of Riven.

Hire an editor for Searcher of Riven from Fiveer.

Edit Ruins of Yarnud.

Hire an editor for Ruins of Yarnud from Fiveer.

Put the novel, Assassin in New Marl City, into the writing program, Scrivener.

Buy e-book covers for Searcher of Riven and Ruins of Yarnud from Fiveer.

Buy an e-book cover for Assassin in New Marl City from Fiveer.

Planned Events for April 2019

I plan to attend the Western Reserve Writers Conference on April 27, 2019, at the Cuyahoga County Public Library at South Euclid, Ohio