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Conference Recap ConFusion Detroit 2020

Conference Recap ConFusion Detroit 2020

Introduction

I attended the SF conference named ConFusion Detroit 2020 at 21111 Haggerty Road Novi, Michigan at the Sheraton Detroit Novi from January 16 to 19, 2020. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors ConFusion Detroit 2020. I attended four panels, two readings, and one interview. The theme of the conference was How to Train Your Confusion. It was a play on words promoting the movie How to Train Your Dragon. They showed the movie in the boardroom, but I did not watch it then.

This is a link to the ConFusion website.

http://confusionsf.org/

The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors Detroit ConFusion.

Outside the Sheraton in snowy Michigan at the ConFusion Detroit 2020 Science Fiction Conference.

The 2020 Logo for ConFusion Detroit 2020.

ConFusion Detroit 2020 Program Guide Cover

This is my badge for ConFusion Detroit 2020.

Summary

Saturday, January 18th at 10 AM

The Future of Space Travel panel with Jeff Beeler, Elly Bangs, Shannon Eichhorn, and Tobias Buckell:

What do the future of space travel hold for us in the near term and the far future? They talked about playing the game Kerbal Space Program. It is a space flight simulation game where the player manages a space program using green-skinned Kerbals. https://www.kerbalspaceprogram.com/ For the current state of the space program they talked about the 2020 Mars Lander and BFR Plus spaceship designed by SpaceX. Recommended books and websites followed. The Case for Mars by Robert Zubin. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/56713.The_Case_for_Mars The Elon Musk Blog Series, Wait but Why by Tim Urban. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29437730-the-elon-musk-blog-series The SpaceX feed at https://twitter.com/SpaceX  They suggest following Gwynne Shotwell, who is the President and Chief Operating Officer of SpaceX. She is the one who makes Elon Musk’s ideas become reality.

They held the panel in the Interlochen room with 28 attendees. There weren’t enough chairs in the room, so six people were standing, including me.

Saturday, January 18th at 11 AM

Interstellar Nations and Warfare: Space Opera Worldbuilding panel with Karen Burnham, Marquel Jacob, Jenn Lyons, and Glynn Stewart:

The first point is why write space opera if the physics tells us it is not likely that we will communicate instantly through space and there is no faster than light space travel? We write space opera because it is fun to extrapolate on current technology. If the writer keeps the rules consistent internally, then it is okay to write space opera.

If civilization is interstellar, then there should not be a scarcity of resources. So, where does the conflict come from? The conflict could come with ideas and the scarcity of specific resources. The primal motivations are land, money, and lies. Examples used with FTL travel as conflicts are an unstable FTL travel method in The Collapsing Empire by John Scalzi and the scarcity of the spice used for FTL travel in Dune by Frank Hebert. The panel talked about pet peeves where authors get Worldbuilding wrong. Not following the rules of artificial gravity, there is no FTL travel in the story, but there is a fast trip to Jupiter, a one ecosystem planet, and no normal people left.

They held the panel in the Manitou room with 22 attendees.

Saturday, January 18th at 4 PM

Reading by John Scalzi:

John Scalzi read from his soon to be released novel named the Last Emperox, a story from his book A Very Scalzi Christmas, a post from his blog, and he ended the hour with a question-and-answer session.

He read Chapter Two of The Last Emperox. It is the third and final book of the Interdependency Trilogy and will be released on April 14, 2020. The Chapter was from Kiva Lagos’s perspective and concerns the events that occurred at the end of the previous novel in the series.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/38322550-the-last-emperox

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A Very Scalzi Christmas collects 15 short tales about the holiday season. He read one tale named Resolutions for the New Year–A Bullet Point List. It was brief and was hilarious.

He read from his Blog called Whatever. It was a piece from his answers to reader requests. This one was on civility, question #5 from 2019. See the article through the link. https://whatever.scalzi.com/2019/11/20/reader-request-week-2019-5-civility/

A short Q and A followed. Scalzi had a question about using the first person in his novel named Lock In. He remarked that seven years ago there was no narrative about binary gender identification. Now, only seven years later, it’s not even an issue anymore. Someone asked Scalzi about how he got the military culture correct in the Old Man’s War series. He said his father and brother were in the service and he did a lot of research to make the story work. Someone asked Scalzi about TV and movie projects. He confirmed that the Redshirts project is dead… twice dead. Scalzi confirmed that he has delivered 4 of the 13 novels contacted by Tor. The trilogy is a trilogy and no more, though his original proposal included a book set 5000 years in the Interdependency’s future.

The whole hour was fun and perfect. It was my best hour of the conference.

They held the reading in Ballroom C & D with 33 attendees.

Saturday, January 18th at 5 PM

Science Guest of Honor Reading of Edible Insects and Human Evolution by Dr. Julie Lesnik:

She read from her book Edible Insects and Human Evolution. Images projected on a screen accompanied the reading. Most of the images were humorous.

First, we must understand our aversion to eating insects. Humans display fear and disgust for the concept of eating bugs. Fear goes with spiders and disgust goes with an aversion to disease. By taste, humans associate sweet and salty to good and bitter to bad. Uncooked insects are bitter; thus, people consider them bad to eat.

Insects in the human diet have gone for absent to adverse through time. Romans consumed insects. Something happened where insects have become absent in Western Civilization’s diet, and this absence has transformed into an aversion to eating insects. In modern times, people in Equatorial regions consume insects. Why is this behavior observed?

Will humans overcome the aversion to eating insects? Insects are a great source of protein. They use Black Soldier fly larva in pet food and they use mealworms in bioconversion. The most likely source for insect consumption is crickets. They are not economical now, but the price point is coming closer to feasibility. She brought edible crickets for those audience members who wanted to try them.

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They held the reading in the Keweenaw room with 31 attendees. There weren’t enough chairs in the room, so four people stood.

Saturday, January 18th at 6 PM

Short Fiction Submission: Advice from the Editor panel with Jeff Chapman, Jennie Ivins, Scott Andrews, Mur Lafferty, and Alvin Mullin:

The editors in the panel answered about the dos and don’ts when submitting for magazines and anthologies. The panelists have a varied background as editors.

Jeff Chapman reaches writing and is an editor for a literary magazine.

Jennie Ivins is the editor for http://fantasy-faction.com/

Scott Andrews is the editor for http://www.beneath-ceaseless-skies.com/

Mur Lafferty is the editor for https://escapepod.org/

Alvin Mullin is an anthology editor.

Advice for successfully submitting short fiction includes use no special formatting, learn about special requirements for each market where you are submitting, and read an issue of the magazine to understand the stories the magazine accepts. Read the submission guidelines and know your market. Note that the submission grinder gives example turnaround times for each magazine. https://thegrinder.diabolicalplots.com/

Keep your cover letters short. Try to emotionally detach yourself from rejection. Form rejections are part of the process. A mistake is a moment to learn. If they reject you, then you are a working writer.

Here are other links to websites detailing magazines looking for stories in the science fiction, fantasy, and horror genres. Ralan https://www.ralan.com/, Duotrope https://duotrope.com/, and Locus magazine https://locusmag.com/

Don’t follow the trends. Good stories create trends. Write the story from your heart. Don’t reply to rejection with anger.

They held the panel in the Isle Royale room with 22 attendees.

Sunday, January 19th, at 10 AM

Black Gate Interview with Author Guest of Honor Kameron Hurley by Brandon Crilly:

They recorded this interview for Black Gate Publishing at https://www.blackgate.com/

She talked about the great time she had on her Spanish tour in 2019. She talked about pushing for getting a breakout book which caused her to burnout. It took her four years to write book three of a series when she lost her agent and wondered if she could make a living as a writer. She persevered, got a new agent, and wrote three books in a year. Keep doing the work because you don’t know what book will break out. Continue your journey on how to take feedback. Turn off your critic’s brain when you are reading as an author. Create a realistic success metric for yourself. Write the book of your heart.

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They held the panel in the Charlevoix room with 12 attendees.

Sunday, January 19th at 11 AM

Plan Your Outbreak! lecture with Keren Landsman:

Keren Landsman is an Israeli writer and doctor specializing in Epidemiology and Public Health. Her science lecture was about from influenza to the black death, discussing what made the largest biological disasters happen and how to use that knowledge in Worldbuilding an outbreak.

Worldbuilding is a character on its own. It needs a significant role in the story’s plot. A pathogen causes disease. She talked about various diseases including Tuberculosis, syphilis, the black plague, rabies, cholera, and Ebola. An example was the Broad Street Pump. Dr. John Snow figures out the cause for a cholera outbreak by interviewing patients to determine they all used a single contaminated water pump.

One thing to remember is that doctors and nurses always get the disease they are treating. The family members are the next to get the disease. Rabies is not a good disease to build an outbreak story from since it is only transmitted from animal to human by biting. Traveling Italian merchants brought The Black Death to Europe. It is normal to have quarantine for 40 days.

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They held the panel in the Leelanaw room with 10 attendees.

Recommendation – Conclusion

As I drove up I-75 into Michigan, I drove into a snowstorm. I drove slowly and got there safely. The ConFusion Detroit 2020 conference was held in this location previously. In 2019, I attended the con in another location, so it took me a while to figure out how to get to the conference center from inside the hotel. Once I got to the conference center, the locations were easy to navigate. There was more room at this location and it had more activities than in 2019. I enjoyed the variety. My star of the con was John Scalzi. He gave an excellent reading of Chapter Two of his upcoming book named The Last Emperox. My other highlights were Kameron Hurley’s interview and the lecture on Edible Insects and Human Evolution. I’m planning to return next year.

Links

I attended the SF conference ConFusion in Detroit, Michigan from January 18 to 20, 2019. The theme of the con was Storming the ConFusion, so they designated the areas with names related to the movie, The Princess Bride. I had a great drive to Detroit just before the snowstorm came. My star of the con was John Scalzi. He gave an excellent reading and was engaging in the panel I attended. My other highlights were Ada Palmer’s interview and watching The Princess Bride at the con. I’ll be back next year.

Writing Progress Report February 2020

Writing Progress Report February 2020

This is my Writing Progress Report February 2020.

Outside the Sheraton in snowy Michigan at ConFusion Science Fiction Conference.

Writing Progress from January 2020

I wrote five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my writing progress report for January 2019 linked below.

In July 2018, I completed the first draft of Assassin in New Marl City totaling 99,981 words and 36 chapters. Completed pre-draft two (30 chapters long) in December 2018 at 89,072 words. Finished draft two edits for Chapters 26 and 27 in August, chapters 28, 29, and 30 in September, and chapters 19 and 20 in October. I reviewed chapter 21 in November and chapter 25 in December to complete the draft two edit. I will start the third draft edits in March 2020.

In January, I submitted chapters 25 and 26 of Assassin in New Marl City to the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

In January, I submitted the story “Hannibal Washington’s Fall” to the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in January.

In the past, I submitted the stories The Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, Get to the Point, LARP Film noir, and Sleeping Sickness to magazines.

I submitted “Popular Mechanics Re-brewed” to Daily Science Fiction online magazine in January.

Magazine submissions for 2020 are; 1 different story submitted 1 time with 0 accepted, 1 pending, and 0 rejection.

Events from January 2020

I attended the ConFusion Conference in Novi, Michigan from January 16 to 19, 2020. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association Sponsors ConFusion.

https://2020.confusionsf.org/

Writing Goals for February 2020

I plan to write five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my Writing Progress Report for February 2020.

I plan to work on third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. In July 2019, I started the third draft edit for Chapter One and used it at the first pages workshop at Confluence 2019. I plan to complete third draft edits for chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 in March 2020.

Polish and submit the stories Caliburnus, Space-Dog Confession, White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

Submit the Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness, and Popular Mechanics Re-brewed to other short fiction magazines.

Put the novel, Assassin in New Marl City, into the writing program, Scrivener.

Buy an e-book cover for Assassin in New Marl City from Fiveer.

Write a story for the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account; update the information on my Facebook and Twitter accounts and update all the pages of my website in February 2020.

Planned Events for February 2020

The next conference I plan to attend is Cleveland ConCoction on March 20 to 22, 2020.

Cleveland ConCoction

This is a link to the Cleveland ConCoction website.

http://www.clevelandconcoction.org/

Conference Recap Marcon Columbus 2017

Marcon Columbus 2017

Conference Recap Marcon Columbus 2017

Introduction

I attended the SF Conference Marcon Columbus 2017 on May 13, 2017. They held the conference at 350 North High Street Columbus, Ohio 43215 at the Hyatt Regency Columbus. The drive was two-plus hours taken in the morning and back in the evening. I also attended Marcon in 2018 and 2019. The 2019 convention was from May 10 to 12, 2019 and I realized when I wrote a recap for that conference, I had not posted a recap for the 2017 conference. This is my recap of the 2017 conference. I attended five panels at the 2017 conference.

The link to the Marcon website.

http://marcon.org/

Marcon Columbus 2017 Program Guide Cover

Picture of my badge from Marcon Columbus 2017

Summary

Saturday, May 13th at 11:30 AM

Dystopias 2: this is the way the world ends, a panel with Karen Dollinger, Courtney Bliss, Joaryn Bailey, Donald Haynes, and Alyssa Pence.

The discussion was about dystopias. You don’t need an apocalypse to get a dystopia. Someone benefits from a dystopia. The story helps us to question how things are now. Books in this genre are a lens for social commentary. Human nature is not to be static. Recommended books are Newsflesh by Mira Grant, The City of Ember by Jeanne DuPrau, and 1984 by George Orwell.

They held the panel in the McKinley Room with 15 attendees.

Saturday, May 13th at 1 PM

Humorous Science Fiction and Fantasy, a panel with Addie J. King, Kandi Hopkins, Deb Wallace, and L. Anne Wooley.

Who does humor well? The answers were Terry Pratchett, John Scalzi, Christopher Moore, J. K. Rowling, Robert Asprin, Spider Robinson, and Jim Butcher.

What makes it work? If you find it funny, then you may be able to write it. Use humor to break up the serious parts of your novel. Give the readers a break by using humor. Try not to over-explain the humor or it will lose its impact.

They held the panel in the McKinley Room with 16 attendees.

Saturday, May 13th at 2:30 PM

Antiheroes: When the main character could easily be the villain, a panel with Denice Verrico, Karen Dollinger, Faye Malcolm, Erin Reilly-Sanders, Van Siegling.

There is a spectrum of characters from the worst villain Sauron from Lord of the Rings to the best hero Dudley Doo Right. An antihero works as long as the protagonist is more hero-like on the spectrum than the antagonist. An Antihero rejects the norms of society. Examples of antiheroes are Dexter, protagonists in bank heist stories, Walter White, Saul Goodman, and Scarlett O’Hara.

They held the panel in the McKinley Room with 21 attendees.

Saturday,May 13th at 4 PM

The Difference Between Story and Plot, a panel with Shannon Eichhorn, Charles Ebert, Addie J. King, Linda Robertson, Scott M. Sandridge.

The story is how you get there and the plot is the mechanics of the story. Ask yourself, does the plot move the story along? Read what you write. You need to be in love with your story as you are writing it. Write what you want too in the first draft but be prepared to kill your darlings in editing to strengthen your story. When constructing a story understand if your genre expects a series.

They held the panel in the McKinley Room with 11 attendees.

Saturday, May 13th at 5:30 PM

Cursed Children and Fantastic Beasts, a panel with Karen Dollinger, Hannah Blosser, Emily Lydic, Leah Nicola, and Amanda Caskey.

The panelists were experts in all things Harry Potter. Harry Potter and the Cursed Child: Parts One and Two is a stage play of the theater production. They held the stage production on July 30, 2016, and the book was released on July 31, 2016. The panelists talked about both presentations. They released the movie named Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them on November 18, 2016. The panel talked about the movie and the expected four sequels.

They held the panel in the Harrison Room with 12 attendees.

Recommendation – Conclusion

I had a great time at Marcon Columbus 2017. My star of the con was the panel on Cursed Children and Fantastic Beasts. I had read the printed stage play for Harry Potter and the Cursed Child and watched the movie Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, so I understood the panel and enjoyed what they had to say. I also attended Marcon in 2018 and 2019 and plan to return on May 9, 2020.

Links

Recap for SF Conference Marcon Columbus I attended on May 12, 2018, at the Hyatt Regency in Columbus, Ohio. I attended four panels and two game shows.

Recap for SF Conference Marcon Columbus on May 11, 2019. They held it at Crowne Plaza – Columbus North. I also attended Marcon in 2017 and 2018. This year I attended four panels, a performance, and an interview.

Goodreads page for Harry Potter and the Cursed Child: Parts One and Two.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29056083-harry-potter-and-the-cursed-child

Conference Recap Cleveland ConCoction 2017

Conference Recap Cleveland ConCoction 2017

Introduction

I attended the SF conference Cleveland ConCoction 2017 at 5300 Riverside Drive Cleveland, Ohio at the Sheraton Cleveland Airport Hotel from March 10, 2017, to March 12, 2017. The 2019 convention was from March 1 to 3, 2019 and I realized when I wrote a recap for that conference, I had not posted a recap for the 2017 conference. This is a recap of the 2017 conference. I attended three panels, two author showcases, two performances, the state of the con panel, and the closing ceremony. I also volunteered in the ConSuite for twelve hours.

The link to the ConCoction website.

http://www.clevelandconcoction.org/

Cleveland ConCoction Banner

Cleveland ConCoction 2017 Program Guide Cover. Even though the cover has 2016 listed, this was the 2017 program. The theme was Grimm’s’ Fairy Tales.

Picture of my badge from Cleveland ConCoction 2017

Summary

Friday, March 10th from 4 PM to 9 PM

I volunteered in the ConSuite Department for five hours on Friday. The ConSuite was in a back bar at the Sheraton Hotel.

Friday, March 10th at 9 PM

A concert by the Blibbering Humdingers

This duo played what they called wizard rock. Most of the songs in this concert dealt with themes from Harry Potter. The songs played were “Love Song of Sirius Black (Dementor in Love)”, “Voldemort made me crap my pants”, “Lily’s Worst Memory,” “Best Game Ever,” “Hot Girl in the Comic Shop,” and “Awkward Hug.” I thought “Best Game Ever” was the best song they played at this session.

They held the concert in the Orion A Room.

Saturday, March 11th from 9 AM to 4 PM

I volunteered in the ConSuite Department for seven hours on Friday. The ConSuite was in a back bar at the Sheraton Hotel. During this time, I was helping to make Rice Krispy blocks used in patterns. When I did that, I saw the coffee session with Glen Cook, but I didn’t hear much of the conversation.

Saturday, March 11th at 5 PM

Author Showcase (Session 4)

Four authors read from their works in the showcase.

Brent D. Seth read from his novel named Shortfuse.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/25456172-short-fuse

Mary Turzillo read a short story from her short story collection named Bonsai Babies.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/32269487-bonsai-babies

Addie J. King read from her novel Shades of Gray. It is about a rookie cop and werewolves.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26850087-shades-of-gray

Kathy Callahan read from her vampire novel.

They held the showcase in the Lyra room with 8 attendees.

Saturday, March 11th at 6 PM

Common Problems New Writers Encounter, a panel with Shannon Eichhorn, Sara Dobie Bauer, J. Thorn, and James Barnes.

J. Thorn outlined his process. He recommended the book The Story Grid by Shawn Coyne. Know what you need next he suggests. Look into getting a developmental editor, a line editor, a copy editor, and then beta readers. Other suggestions for new writers from the panel were as follows. Write what you are passionate about. Don’t have a fear of breaking rules. Be cautious of giving too much back story and info dumps. Know your genre. Books used as examples were Pet Semetary by Stephen King and The Road by Cormac McCarthy.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/25455700-the-story-grid

They held the panel in the Pegasus room with 13 attendees.

Saturday, March 11th at 7 PM

Elevator Pitch Tutorial Session, a panel with Addie J. King, James Barnes, J. Thorn, Mary Turzillo, and Linda Robertson.

An Elevator Pitch explains the essence of a novel. The idea is to give the pitch to someone who could be interested in representing your book in the time it would take an elevator to go six floors. In the pitch, you want to describe what your book is about. Think about your ideal customer when you are designing the pitch. Think about how you would describe your book to an editor. The Pixar Pitch is a six-line template that can tell the story of your work developed by Emma Coats. You can find the pitch in Daniel H. Pink’s book named To Sell Is Human. The pitch fits for the Pixar movies but can be adapted to any written work. Linda Robertson gave out a handout. In it the main points were that you need a concept, a premise, ask questions, and understand the character’s stakes in your story. The concept and the premise when read together is your elevator pitch.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/13593553-to-sell-is-human

They held the panel in the Lyra Room with 7 attendees.

Saturday, March 11th at 8 PM

A concert by the Blibbering Humdingers

I liked the first concert, so I came back to see them again. This duo played what they called wizard rock. Most of the songs in this concert dealt with themes from Harry Potter. The songs I saw played in this session were “Hufflepuff Sandwich,” “Zip Me Up,” and “Natural 20 (a song about playing the Dungeons and Dragons Game).”

They held the concert in the Orion A Room.

Sunday, March 12th at 10 AM

State of the Con Q and A

The Con Chairs talked about how Cleveland ConCoction 2017 went this week and about plans for 2018.

They held the panel in the Orion A Room with 10 attendees.

Sunday, March 12th at 11 AM

Post-Apocalypse–How Will It End?, a panel with J. L. Gribble, Weston Kincade, and Brent D. Seth.

The panelists talked about the novels Flood by Stephen Baxter and The Road by Cormac McCarthy. They also talked about the TV show called The 100.

They held the panel in the Pegasus Room.

Sunday, March 12th at 12 PM

Author Showcase (Session 5)

Four authors read from their works.

Linda Robertson read from her novel Jovienne.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/32713330-jovienne

J. D. Blackrose read a story about Vampires and Valkyries.

https://www.goodreads.com/author/list/16065546.J_D_Blackrose

Adrian Matthews read from his novel Olivia’s Return (BloodDark Book #1)

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/31670766-olivia-s-escape

Cindy Matthews read from her novel Olivia’s Return (BloodDark Book #2)

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34197040-olivia-s-return

They held the panel in the Lyra Room with 3 attendees.

Sunday, March 12th at 2 PM

Closing Ceremonies

The Guests of Honor were presented and thanked for Cleveland ConCoction 2017.

They held the panel in the Orion A Room.

Recommendation – Conclusion

I had a great time at Cleveland ConCoction 2017. It was my first time at this con. I worked twelve hours in the ConSuite and I don’t plan on doing that again because I missed events I wanted to see. My star of the con was the Blibbering Humdingers. I liked both of the concerts they performed. My other highlights were the Elevator Pitch panel and listening to eight authors who read their work in two showcases. I attended Cleveland ConCoction in 2018 and 2019 and I bought my pass for 2020.

Links

I attended Cleveland ConCoction 2019 at 600 North Aurora Road Aurora, Ohio at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 1 to 3, 2019. Attended the opening ceremony, four panels, and the closing ceremony. I also volunteered in the Programming Department for four hours and in the ConSuite for four hours. This is a link to my conference recap.

I also attended Cleveland ConCoction at 600 North Aurora Road Aurora, Ohio at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 9, 2018, to March 11, 2018. Attended the opening ceremony, five panels, two author showcases, a performance, and the closing ceremony. I also volunteered in the ConSuite for eight hours. This is a Link to my conference recap.

Murderbot Diaries by Martha Wells

Murderbot Diaries by Martha Wells

Murderbot Diaries by Martha Wells. All Systems Red (Book 1), Artificial Condition (Book 2), Rogue Protocol (Book 3), and Exit Strategy (Book 4)

Introduction

The Murderbot Diaries are a series of four novellas that complete a self-contained single story. I have reviewed the first novella called All Systems Red. The review is linked to the link section of this review. I will review the other three novellas in this review. The protagonist of the diaries is a SecUnit (Security Unit), a partially organic and partially mechanical cyborg, or as she calls herself a Murderbot.

Summary

Summary of All Systems Red (Book 1)

The SecUnit (Security Unit) for the PreservationAux survey group has hacked and disabled her governor module during her last contract. The hack lets her follow the Company’s programming or to ignore it. SecUnits are built by the Company and must be used by every survey team for protection. The PersevationAux group surveys a planet to decide if they want to bid to the Company on building a colony there.

The story’s complication occurs when they lose contact with the DeltFall Group survey team, the only other survey team assigned to their planet. Dr. Mensah, the leader of the PreservationAux Group, investigates at DeltFall’s habitat despite the SecUnit’s suggestion they leave the investigation to the Company. What they find at the habitat changes their perspective on the Company and on their SecUnit’s behavior.

Summary of Artificial Condition (Book 2)

The SecUnit leaves Dr. Mensah and the PreservationAux Group, but she doesn’t remember all that happened during her contact with the DeltFall Group. She takes passage on a research vessel she names ART. ART has more intelligence than most bot ship drivers and it finds out she is not on a contract. They become friends and ART helps her look more human so she can go back to Ganaka Pit, the place where her memory was purged. What she finds there sends her on a mission to discover the truth behind what happened at Ganaka Pit.

Summary of Rogue Protocol (Book 3)

SecUnit learned from her last mission that the GrayCris corporation was involved in what happened at Ganaka Pit. She takes a transport ship to a planet named Milu to investigate what GrayCris did at a terraforming station they have closed down and sold. SecUnit unravels their plot and looks for incriminating evidence against GrayCris. She is helped on her mission by a bot the humans treat as a pet named Miki.

Summary of Exit Strategy (Book 4)

SecUnit heads back personally give the information she discovered to Dr. Mensah. GrayCris has kidnapped Dr. Mensah to lure SecUnit into a trap.

Recommendation

This is great. The Murderbot Dairies read like a long episodic novel. The action moves and SecUnit is an engaging protagonist. All she wants to do is re-watch episodes of The Rise and Fall of Sanctuary Moon, but her past intrudes on her watching. Those pesky humans always have to be protected, and she does it well with snark, at least in her inner dialogue. Fortunately, we are there for the ride. I want to read the Murderbot novel, Network Effect, that is scheduled to be released on May 5, 2020.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page for All Systems Red by Martha Wells.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/32758901-all-systems-red

This is a link to my review of All Systems Red by Martha Wells, Book 1 of The Murderbot Diaries.

This is the link to the Goodreads page for Network Effect by Martha Wells. It is the Murderbot novel due to be published on May 5, 2020.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/47902784-network-effect

Dragon Reborn by Robert Jordan

Dragon Reborn by Robert Jordan. Book three of the Wheel of Time series.

Introduction

Dragon Reborn by Robert Jordan is the third book of The Wheel of Time series. Perrin and Moraine follow Rand to Tear. Mat, Egwene, Nyneave, and Elyane follow the Black Ajah to Tear. They meet at the Stone of Tear and Rand meets his destiny with the sword that is not a sword named Callendor. Can Rand wield Callendor to prove he is the Dragon Reborn and defeat Ba’alzamon?

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Summary

Dragon Reborn by Robert Jordan begins soon after Great Hunt by Robert Jordan ended. The battle at Falme is over and Rand unfurls the Dragon Banner. The Dragon banner group hides in the hills considering their next move. Moiraine, the Aes Sedai, and her warder Lan protect the group. Perrin, the wolf brother and Min, the lady of prophecy, and Loial, the Oglier are members of the group. Something unexpected happens and Rand leaves the protecting hills and the group follows him but is one step behind him on their way to Tear. Callendor, the sword that is not a sword, is found in Tear. The prophecy is that the Stone of Tear will fall and the one who can wield Callendor is the Dragon Reborn.

Meanwhile, the rest of the cast is in Tar Volan. Egwene, Nynaeve, and Elayne are training under the tutelage of the Aes Sedai. They have brought Mat, the trickster, to Tar Volan for the Aes Sedai to heal him. They hope the most powerful of the Aes Sedai can heal Mat from the curse of the dagger he took from Shadar Logoth. The Black Ajah makes its presence known. The members of the Black Ajah are Aes Sedai who follows the dark one. Egwene, Nynaeve, and Elayne head to Tear to fight the Black Ajah.

Both groups travel to Tear and Rand proves his worth.

Recommendation

The Dragon Reborn is another great novel in the Wheel of Time series. It was a great idea to limit Rand’s POV chapters and having him as a mysterious force that the group follows. Bringing almost everyone in the cast to Tear worked well. I enjoyed Mat’s story the best. His story feels like a spy thriller. Perrin faces his main dilemma of whether to take up the blacksmith hammer and a non-combat role or the war ax and a combat role. The best moment of the novel comes at the end when Rand responds to the climax of the novel. It is a perfect reaction and Moraine states the truth that will propel Rand, Perrin, and Mat in the novels that follow. I am looking forward to watching the first season of the Amazon Prime Video adaption of the first two novels of the series in 2020.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Dragon Reborn by Robert Jordan.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/359820.The_Dragon_Reborn

This is the link to my review of Great Hunt by Robert Jordan, Book two of the Wheel of Time.

This is the link to my review of Eye of the World by Robert Jordan, Book one of the Wheel of Time.

Writing Progress Report January 2020

This is my Writing Progress Report January 2020.

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Writing Progress from December 2019

I wrote five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my writing progress report for December 2019 linked below.

In July 2018, I completed the first draft of Assassin in New Marl City totaling 99,981 words and 36 chapters. Completed pre-draft two (30 chapters long) in December 2018 at 89,072 words. Finished draft two edits for Chapters 26 and 27 in August, chapters 28, 29, and 30 in September, and chapters 19 and 20 in October. I reviewed chapter 21 in November and chapter 25 in December to complete the draft two edit. I will start the third draft edits in January 2020.

In December, I submitted chapters 23 and 24 of Assassin in New Marl City to the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

In December, I submitted the story “The Past Under Glass” to the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in December.

In the past, I submitted the stories The Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, Get to the Point, LARP Film noir, and Sleeping Sickness to magazines.

Final statistics of magazine submissions for 2019 are; 1 different story submitted 1 time with 0 accepted, 0 pending, and 1 rejection.

Events from December 2019

The next conference I plan to attend is ConFusion in Novi, Michigan from January 16 to 19, 2020. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors ConFusion.

https://2020.confusionsf.org/

Writing Goals for January 2020

I plan to write five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my Writing Progress Report for January 2020.

I plan to work on third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. In July 2019, I started the third draft edit for Chapter One used at the first pages workshop at Confluence 2019. I plan to complete third draft edits for chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4 in January 2020.

Polish and submit the stories Caliburnus, Space-Dog Confession, White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

Submit The Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness to other short fiction magazines.

Put the novel, Assassin in New Marl City, into the writing program, Scrivener.

Buy an e-book cover for Assassin in New Marl City from Fiveer.

Write a story for the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account; update the information on my Facebook and Twitter accounts and update all the pages of my website in January 2020.

Planned Events for January 2020

The next conference I plan to attend is ConFusion in Novi, Michigan from January 16 to 19, 2020. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors ConFusion.

https://2020.confusionsf.org/

Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi

Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi

Introduction

Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi is the second book in the Old Man’s War series. The Colonial Defense Forces created Jared Dirac for a specific purpose. He is a member of the Ghost Brigades who are the elite troops of the CDF. Jared is a clone of the mad evil scientist Charles Boutin and was made because Boutin has betrayed humanity enabling three alien civilizations to ally against humanity. The CDF wants to understand Boutin’s motivations by studying Jared and defeating Boutin and the aliens. Will Jared help the CDF when Boutin’s memories become his own memories?

Summary

Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi starts with Lieutenant Sagan interviewing a captive alien. The alien gives its view on humanity. He sees three kinds of humans. There are the unmodified humans that colonize unclaimed planets. The main members of the Colonial Defense Forces are older unmodified humans who have their minds transferred to young clone bodies. The CDF creates the third human from human DNA. They are the Ghost Brigades of the CDF. They make Jared Dirac from Boutin’s DNA. When he gains consciousness he doesn’t have any of Boutin’s memories. The CDF trains him in the Ghost Brigades and sends him out on missions. On his missions, his memories are triggered, and he has memories of being Boutin. He must understand why Boutin did what he did and Jared must forge his own path to save humanity.

Recommendation

This novel is a great sequel to Old Man’s War. Old Man’s War was about the second humans, the members of the CDF. Adding the Ghost Brigades ratcheted up the tension in the sequel. Jared Dirac was a great character to show the reader the methods of the Ghost Brigades. Charles Boutin seems like a mad scientist from an old school space opera but he is more than that. I appreciate that the author took an old trope and made it new. The author sets up the next novel in the series at the end of this novel. I am looking forward to reading book three of the series, The Last Colony.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/239399.The_Ghost_Brigades

Old Man’s War is the first novel in the Old Man’s War series. This is the link to my review.

In Redshirts by John Scalzi, they assign Ensign Andrew Dahl to the starship Intrepid. Crew members on away missions die at an alarming rate, but not the officers. Dahl must discover the unbelievable truth, or he will die like the other Redshirts. This is the link to my review.

Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold

Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold

Introduction

Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold is his non-fiction book on the craft of writing, subtitled how to write science fiction and fantasy. The most famous work that he wrote was the episode of Star Trek (the original series) called “The Trouble with Tribbles”. He also wrote scripts and directed episodes of other Star Trek series. He wrote novels in the science fiction and fantasy genre. This book tells about his writing path and gives examples from his works to help aspiring writers. Where should you start as a new writer? Use this book.

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Summary

Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold starts with two of his college instructors who taught him valuable lessons. The first instructor told him he would never make it as a writer. That rage against failure fueled him to do well. The other instructor stressed the importance of structure. David Gerrold took that advice to mean he should learn from the masters of his chosen genre of science fiction and fantasy to see how they were successful. He realized that a story is about a person’s problem solving and the lessons learned through that experience.

Ask yourself If questions to invent the wonder of your story. Find your hero and your hero’s problem. Your hero will face crises and challenges. Set the stage and build your world. The first line is important to hook the reader and keep them reading. He gives examples of love scenes from his novels When Harlie was One and A Method for Madness. He goes over each structural device for writing. Discipline is important because real writers write. Use the idea that your first million words are for practice. If you end up selling any of your first million words, then that is a bonus for you. He ends the book with ten pieces of good advice.

Recommendation

Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold is a useful book about writing. It is short and easy to read. The author has a conversational way of writing. The advice is sound but like other books I have read. I remember reading the author’s novel The Man Who Folded Himself when I was in high school. I also remember that he was the writer of “The Trouble with Tribbles”. David Gerrold was a panelist and an interviewee at Marcon in Columbus Ohio on May 11, 2019. I had planned to read this book but because of the conference, I read it sooner than I planned. I am glad that I did.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Worlds of Wonder by David Gerrold

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/39709934-worlds-of-wonder

Recap for SF Conference Marcon Columbus on May 11, 2019. They held it at Crowne Plaza – Columbus North. I also attended Marcon in 2017 and 2018. This year I attended four panels, a performance, and an interview. My star of the con was David Gerrold. He was engaging in the panel and the interview that I attended with him.

Save the Cat Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody takes the books of Blake Snyder and applies his teachings to writing novels. She presents complete beat sheets and genre breakdowns of current and past novels. This is the link to my review.

Another similar book on writing is How to Write Best Selling Fiction by Dean Koontz. This is the link to my review. It’s from 1981, but the advice is still great.

Raven Tower by Ann Leckie

Raven Tower by Ann Leckie

Introduction

Raven Tower by Ann Leckie is a fantasy novel from an award-winning science-fiction novelist. The Raven Lease is the speaker for the god known as the Raven and the Raven Lease is missing. Mawat is the heir to the Raven Lease and returns from wars in the south with his aide Eolo. Eolo learns secrets about the Raven and must decide what to do with that knowledge. The novel’s one-line preface is “there will be a reckoning”. What reckoning will take place?

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Summary

Raven Tower by Ann Leckie begins with an unknown narrator speaking in the second-person to Eolo. The narration is like the narrator telling a story to Eolo after the events have occurred. Eolo is returning to Vastai, the capital of Iraden. Eolo is the aide to Mawat, and they have been at war in the south but must return to Vastai because Mawat is the heir to the Raven Lease. The Raven Lease is the speaker for the god known as the Raven and the Raven Lease is missing. Mawat tries to figure what happened to his father and what is going on in Vastai. Eolo can learn about the situation easier than Mawat could. The narrator influences Eolo and helps Eolo learn secrets. As the novel proceeds, the narrator tells stories that may or may not be told to Eolo. The stories read like parables. Eolo must decide what to do with the secrets learned. There will be a reckoning.

Recommendation

It was ambitious to write a second-person story in a novel-length. I was skeptical of this choice as I read the novel, but I understood the choice and the necessity to write the novel this way after I read to the end of the novel. The identity of the narrator is the whole point of the story. There will be a reckoning. I thought there were unanswered questions that a sequel could answer, but the author has tweeted that she intended the novel as a standalone novel. https://twitter.com/ann_leckie/status/1101144602181025800?lang=en

I enjoyed reading the Raven Tower and think it was the best book I read in 2019.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Raven Tower by Ann Leckie

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/39395857-the-raven-tower

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Ancillary Justice by Ann Leckie

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17333324-ancillary-justice

Ancillary Justice by Ann Leckie won the Hugo, Nebula, Arthur C. Clarke, and many other awards.

This is a link to my review of her novel.