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Writing Progress Report August 2025

This is my Writing Progress Report August 2025.

I attended the Confluence Conference, held near Pittsburgh, PA, from July 25, 2025, to July 27, 2025. They had the conference at the Sheraton Pittsburgh Airport Hotel in Coraopolis, PA.

Writing Progress from July 2025.

I wrote four blog posts for my website, garydavidgillen.com. Including my writing progress report for July 2025, which I linked below.

In July 2025, I presented the short story named Erebus Project to the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call.

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in July 2025.

In the past, I sent the stories, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, and Grognard to magazines.

The seven Flash Fiction Stories I sent out in 2020 and 2021 were Space-Dog Confession, Sleeping Sickness, Caliburnus, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, Wormhole Generator, Runs with Scissors, and Principled Rogue.

Magazine submissions for 2021 were 4 unique stories submitted 4 times, with 0 accepted, 0 pending, and 4 rejections. No submissions for 2022. None for 2023. None for 2024.

Events from July 2025.

I attended the Confluence Conference, held near Pittsburgh, PA, from July 25, 2025, to July 27, 2025. They had the conference at the Sheraton Pittsburgh Airport Hotel in Coraopolis, PA. I attended the Confluence in 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, (2021 was cancelled due to COVID), 2022, 2023, and 2024.

The link to the Confluence website.

https://confluence-sff.org

Writing Goals for August 2025.

In August 2025, I plan to write four blog posts for garydavidgillen.com, including my Writing Progress Report for August 2025.

I plan to work on a story for the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call in August 2025.

Eventually, I plan to work on the third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. I plan to split Chapter 1 into two chapters and add a scene to the new Chapter 1.

Submit the stories Space-Dog Confession, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, and Caliburnus to other short fiction magazines.

Polish and send the stories White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

In August 2025, I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account.

Planned Events for August 2025.

The next conference I plan to attend is the Capclave Conference, held near Wahington D. C. from September 19, 2025, to September 21, 2025. They will have the conference at the Rockville Hilton in Rockville, MD. I attended the Capclave in 2016. Looking forward to going again.

The link to the Capclave website.

Western Reserve Writers Conference 2023

Western Reserve Writers Conference 2023

Introduction

I attended the 38th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference 2025 on March 25, 2023. They held the Conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch of the Cuyahoga County Public Library at the William N. Skirball writer’s center at the branch. It was a one-day event with an introduction, a keynote speaker, three breakout sessions, and one first-page critique panel.

This is the link to the Cuyahoga County Library.

https://www.cuyahogalibrary.org

This is the link to the writer’s center at the library branch.

https://www.cuyahogalibrary.org/Services/William-N-Skirball-Writers-Center.aspx

Summary

Saturday, March 25th at 9:30 AM

Welcome and Conference Overview

Deanna R. Adams is the conference coordinator and Laurie Kincer is the librarian in charge of the writer’s center.

Laurie explained how they set up the library, where the three meeting rooms were located, and about the door prizes available at 4 PM. Deanna introduced the keynote speaker, justin a. reynolds.

They held the welcome and conference overview in the meeting room A/B/C with about 134 attendees.

Saturday, March 25th at 9:40 AM

Keynote Speaker Topic: Building a Writing Community.

The keynote speaker was Abby L. Vandiver. She is a self-published author of twenty novels plus several other books traditionally published.

Abby worked at Cleveland Clinic but lost her job and decided to write a book. She is a hybrid author publishing both self and traditionally. The way to success is when you tell yourself that I am a writer.

She learned certain truths of writing life. We have doubts and that’s ok. We strive for perfection even though that is impossible. Staring at the computer is part of your job. We are reluctant to show our work until it is just right, but that is the wrong way. Get it out there, share your work.

Find out what you need to get you in the mood to write and do that.

Find your reason why you write. Sharing is important to finding your tribe of like-minded readers and writers. Find a challenge partner and your community.

They held the talk in the meeting room A/B/C with about 134 attendees.   

Saturday, March 25th at 3:00 PM

Breakout Session: Writing a Book in 30 Days.

The presenter was Abby L. Vandiver. She is a self-published and traditionally published author.

Abby writes mysteries (dead bodies) and trillers (potential dead bodies). There’s nothing new under the sun, so you need to find a hook. Writing is hard but NANOWRIMO could help kickstart you with the goal of writing 50 thousand words in a month.

Are you a plotter or a pantser? Find your balance. What aspects do you need to write a novel? Think about story, research, characters, plot, setting, and point of view.

Main reasons that novels are left unfinished are unsure of direction to go, missing character motivation, lack of self-motivation, and seeking perfection. Get that first draft written, then you will have something to edit.

Reread a book you like and think about its construction as a writer to help you in your writing journey. Know your ending so you know where you are going.

They held the talk in the writer’s center meeting room with about 40 attendees.

Recommendation – Conclusion

I enjoyed attending the Western Reserve Writers Conference 2023. I also attended the conference in 2019, 2022, 2023 (they canceled the conference in 2020 and 2021 because of COVID-19), 2024, and 2025. My Star of the Con was Abby L. Vandiver. Both of her talks were well thought out and inspiring.

Links

I attended the 40th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference on March 22, 2025. They held the Conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch of the Cuyahoga County Public Library at the William N. Skirball writer’s center at the branch. It was a one-day event with an introduction, a keynote speaker, three breakout sessions, and one first-page critique panel.

I enjoyed attending the Western Reserve Writers Conference 2024. I also attended the conference in 2019, 2022, 2023 (they canceled the conference in 2020 and 2021 because of COVID-19), and 2024. My Star of the Con was J. Thorn. He had some brilliant advice for beginning writers.

This is my Recap for the Western Reserve Writers Conference on March 23, 2024, where I attended the introduction, the keynote speaker presentation and a breakout session. The Cuyahoga County Public Library held the conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch.

This is my Recap for the Western Reserve Writers Conference on March 26, 2022, where I attended the introduction, a keynote speaker, and two breakout sessions. The Cuyahoga County Public Library held the conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch.

More Links

I attended the 36th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference on April 27, 2019. They held the Conference at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst branch of the Cuyahoga County Public Library at the William N. Skirball writer’s center at the branch. It was a one-day event with an introduction, a keynote speaker, three breakout sessions, and one first-page critique panel. I attended the introduction, a keynote speaker, and two breakout sessions. I thought The Western Reserve Writers Conference was well run, diverse in the presentations offered, and informative. My Star of the Con was Bree Barton. Her presentation was fun, the exercises were useful, and I liked her personality.

I attended the 34th annual Western Reserve Writers Conference on September 23, 2017. I could not attend last year. This is a link to my review of the 2017 conference.

Gerald’s Game by Stephen King

Gerald’s Game by Stephen King

Gerald's Game by Stephen King

Introduction

In Gerald’s Game by Stephen King, Jessie has a problem. Her husband, Gerald, likes to play games, the ones that end up with her handcuffed to the bedpost. What happens when they are at their isolated lake house, Gerald cuffs Jessie to the bed, and Gerald becomes incapacitated? Will Jessie escape before she goes crazy, or will she die of dehydration?

Summary

Jessie and Gerald play sexual games involving Jessie being restrained. She doesn’t always like his games, but Gerald has reasons he likes them, and Jessie has reasons that she complies. They go to their isolated lake house in the off-season for a special getaway. Gerald handcuffs her to the bed and gets ready for a session. Jessie is not feeling it and wants him to let her go. He pretends her protests are part of the games. Gerald is incapacitated, and it might have been partially Jessie’s fault. She is trapped.

As time passes, she hears the voices of her split personality and those of other people she has known in her life. She also has flashbacks with her father when they witnessed an eclipse when she was young. It was a pivotal point in her life. Then she sees or imagines a man staring at her in the corner.

An abandoned dog provides an alternate point of view. It is a companion and adversary for Jessie.

Recommendation

Gerald’s Game by Stephen King is an intense psychological thriller. Jessie is stressed to the point of finally facing the psychological trauma she experienced as a child. Her escape attempts were described well. I also watched the Netflix movie based on the book. I thought the filmmaker made interesting choices in portraying Jessie’s inner voices and utilizing the dog. Carla Gugino playing Jessie was fabulous. Something about the ending in the book and the movie felt tacked on to me. Was this a thriller, horror, or something else?

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Gerald’s Game by Stephen King.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28006521-gerald-s-game

In Thinner by Stephen King, Billy accidentally kills an old gypsy woman. Her father curses him to lose weight until he dies. Can Billy reverse the curse, or will he wither and die?

In The Talisman by Stephen King and Peter Straub, twelve-year-old Jack Sawyer’s mother is dying. He must find the mythical Talisman, found in a parallel world named the Territories, to save her. He must pass many challenges to obtain his goal. Will Jack find the Talisman in time to save his mother from death?

It is by Stephen King and has seven kids who face horror. As adults, they face it again. Will the Losers Club defeat the hidden evil in the Derry sewers, or will they perish?

In The Waste Lands by Stephen King, Roland and his group search for a way to the Dark Tower. They find the city of Lud and the way forward. Will Roland and his gunslingers continue their path to the Dark Tower, or will they fail?

Drawing of the Three by Stephen King, book #2 of The Dark Tower series, features Roland, Eddie Dean, and Odetta Holmes. Roland gets one step closer to reaching the Dark Tower.

The Gunslinger by Stephen King, book #1 of The Dark Tower series, seemed to set up for a climax that never happened. What is there is a trippy and metaphysical non-ending.

An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham

An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham (Book #3 of The Long Price Quartet)

Introduction

An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham is the third book in the Long Price Quartet. The cities of Khaiem are protected by the magic of the beings called the andat. Their Empire and their magic have receded, so the non-magical Empire of Galt plots to overthrow them. Otah is the Khai Machi, the ruler of the city of Machi, one of the cities of Khaiem The best Galt general learns how to take away their andat. Will Otah win an autumn war against the Galts, or will they destroy him and all the cities of Khaiem?

An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham

Summary – Background

The cities of the Khaiem are connected by the use of sentient magical creatures called the andat. Each city has one andat controlled by a person called a poet who binds them with a series of words. They name andat by the special task they can perform. Seedless, the andat of the city Saraykeht can magically pick seeds from cotton functioning just like a magical cotton gin. The andat of the city of Machi called Stone-Made-Soft can help with the mining of ores. The andat also protect the cities by having the power to destroy enemies of the Khaiem. No one has defeated the cities since they obtained their andats. The Old Empire before them used the andat but was destroyed, serving as a warning to them of what could go wrong.

Summary – Characters

The Empire of Galt wants to defeat the Khaiem. Balasar Gice is their best general. He searched the ruins of the Old Empire to find the secret to release the andat. He wants to destroy the Khaiem, not just defeat them.

Maati Vaupathai is a scholar, an appentice poet who missed his chance to control the andat called Seedless. The Dai-kvo rules the poets and tells Maati to go see what is going on at the city of Machi and report back to him.

Otah Machi is the sixth son of the Khai Machi. He became the ruler of the city of Machi after his father died. He was appenticed to the poets, where he met Maati, and later Otah was exiled as a laborer. Maati is his old friend but they have a complicated relationship.

Cehmai holds the binding on the andat name Stone-Made-Soft. He wasn’t the originator of the binding, but he holds it now. He considers Maati a mentor.

Liat Chokavi is the former lover of Maati. Liat and Maati are separated but have told everyone that her son Nayiit is his. Nayiit is actuallty Otah’s older son and that makes the succession difficult because only one son can inherit and any others must die or become poets.

Kiyan is Otah’s wife and the mother of their daughter Eiah and their son Danat. Danat is Otah’s heir but he is sickly.

Sinja Ajutani is a mercanary captain from Machi. He is the former lover of Kiyan. He serves as a double agent by hiring his company to the Galtish general Balasar Gice and reporting back to Otah about his movements. 

Recommendation

An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham is a great third book in this fantasy series. The fantasy elements in the series are subtle, focusing more on the political and business sphere. The plot is faster than the first two novels and there is more action due to the Galtish general’s purpose driving the plot. There is an Asian/formal feel through the characters use of poses and their choice of honorifics. Otah is the protagonist in this novel. The ending worked well. It was surprising, but inevitable, to set up the concluding novel.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of An Autumn War by Daniel Abraham

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2443516.An_Autumn_War

In A Betrayal in Winter by Daniel Abraham, The Khai Machi is dying, and his sons must fight to the death to follow him. They exiled his youngest son Otah and presumed him dead. Otah wants to remain hidden but he enters their conflict. If he doesn’t win, the Galts will sack his city.

In A Shadow in Summer by Daniel Abraham, the poet-magician Heshai must keep control of the magical creature Seedless, or the Summer Cities will fall to the Empire of Galt.

This is the link to my review of Persepolis Rising by James S.A. Corey. (Daniel Abraham and Ty Franck write together as James S. A. Corey in this Science Fiction series called The Expanse.)

Writing Progress Report July 2025

This is my Writing Progress Report July 2025.

On May 30, we went to the Cleveland Guardians game at Progressive Field in Cleveland, Ohio. Unfortunately, they lost to the Los Angeles Angels 4 to 1.

Writing Progress from June 2025.

I wrote four blog posts for my website, garydavidgillen.com. Including my writing progress report for June 2025, which I linked below.

In June 2025, I presented the short story named Erebus to the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call.

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in June 2025.

In the past, I sent the stories, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, and Grognard to magazines.

The seven Flash Fiction Stories I sent out in 2020 and 2021 were Space-Dog Confession, Sleeping Sickness, Caliburnus, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, Wormhole Generator, Runs with Scissors, and Principled Rogue.

Magazine submissions for 2021 were 4 unique stories submitted 4 times, with 0 accepted, 0 pending, and 4 rejections. No submissions for 2022. None for 2023. None for 2024.

Events from June 2025.

No events in June.

Writing Goals for July 2025.

In July 2025, I plan to write four blog posts for garydavidgillen.com, including my Writing Progress Report for July 2025.

I plan to work on a story for the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call in July 2025.

Eventually, I plan to work on the third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. I plan to split Chapter 1 into two chapters and add a scene to the new Chapter 1.

Submit the stories Space-Dog Confession, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, and Caliburnus to other short fiction magazines.

Polish and send the stories White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

In July 2025, I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account.

Planned Events for July 2025.

The next conference I plan to attend is the Confluence Conference, held near Pittsburgh, PA, from July 25, 2025, to July 27, 2025. They will have the conference at the Sheraton Pittsburgh Airport Hotel in Coraopolis, PA. I attended the Confluence in 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, (2021 was cancelled due to COVID), 2022, 2023, and 2024.

The link to the Confluence website.

https://confluence-sff.org

The Waste Lands by Stephen King

The Waste Lands by Stephen King, book #3 of The Dark Tower series.

The Waste Lands by Stephen King

Introduction

In The Waste Lands by Stephen King book #3 of the Dark Tower series, Roland and his group search for the way to the Dark Tower. They find a beam that travels through the ancient city of Lud pointing toward the Dark Tower. They must fight the degenerate citizens of Lud and find a sentient monorail train to take them farther. Will Roland and his gunslingers continue their path to the Dark Tower, or will they fail before they even get started?

Summary

The Gunslinger, book #1 of the Dark Tower Series, establishes the constants for the series. Roland is the gunslinger travels a desert looking for the Man in Black who did terrible things to him in the past that he does not remember. This world was damaged by a nuclear event and, in Roland’s words, hasn’t moved on yet. He meets Jake Chambers, a young boy.

The Drawing of the Three, book #2 of the Dark Tower Series continues Roland’s search for the Dark Tower. Roland finds himself on the shore of the Western Sea. He finds a portal to New York City in 1987 where he retrieves Eddie Dean, a heroin addict. The second portal brings Odetta Holmes from 1964 New York City. The third portal goes to New York City in 1977 where Jack Chambers was from. This sets up the third novel.

The Waste Lands, book #3 of the Dark Tower series has Roland teaching Eddie Dean and Susannah Dean (an alternate personality of Odetta Holmes) to become gunslingers. They go into the woods east of the beach and find a portal and a Guardian. Roland remembers that there are twelve guardians arranged in a circle. Each set of two guardians have a beam between each other. Where the six beams intersect, they can find the Dark Tower. They follow the beam to the ancient city of Lud which is an alternate version of New York City. Roland knows he needs Jake Chambers to complete their group and continue their journey to the Dark Tower.

Recommendation

The Waste Lands by Stephen King was an interesting book. There was some action and movement. In the first two novels the reader doesn’t know how Roland will find the Dark Tower. This novel gives us a plan. They must follow the beam to the center and find the Dark Tower, The Man in Black, and answers.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of The Waste Lands by Stephen King, book #3 of The Dark Tower series.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29430671-the-waste-lands

In Thinner by Stephen King, Billy accidentally kills an old gypsy woman. Her father curses him to lose weight until he dies. Can Billy reverse the curse, or will he wither and die?

In The Talisman by Stephen King and Peter Straub twelve-year-old Jack Sawyer’s mother is dying. The only way for him to save her is to find the mythical Talisman which is in a parallel world called the Territories. He must pass many challenges to obtain his goal. Will Jack find the Talisman in time to save his mother from death?

It is by Stephen King and has seven kids who face horror. As adults, they face It again. Will the Losers Club defeat the hidden evil in the Derry sewers, or will they perish?

Drawing of the Three by Stephen King, book #2 of The Dark Tower series, features Roland, Eddie Dean, and Odetta Holmes. Roland gets one step closer to reaching the Dark Tower.

The Gunslinger by Stephen King, book #1 of The Dark Tower series, seemed to set up for a climax that never happened. What is there is a trippy and metaphysical non-ending.

The Devils by Joe Abercrombie

The Devils by Joe Abercrombie, Book #1 of The Devils Series

Introduction

In The Devils by Joe Abercrombie, the adolescent girl Pope assigns the task of installing Alex the long-lost heir to the Empire of Troy to the Throne in this alternate history fantasy. Alex was an orphaned thief in the Holy City of the Pope until Alex’s Uncle Michael discovers her. The Pope sends a group of her vilest criminals nicknamed the Devils to help Alex gain the Throne and unite the Western and Eastern Churches to face the threat of the elves together. Will The Devils overcome their despicable nature to help Alex in her quest, or will they fail?

Summary

The Devils by Joe Abercrombie is an alternate history fantasy. Two important events change the history of Europe. In the novel Troy defeats the Greeks and Carthage defeats the Romans which makes Troy and the Holy City the two most powerful cities in the Mediterranean. Magic exists in this story. Magicians and magical beasts are real. The elves have taken the Far East and have tried to take Troy many times but have failed so far. The Savior was a woman, the daughter of God. The Church of the savior is split with the Pope leading the Western Church and the Patriarch leading the Eastern Church. Crusades were waged against the elves and the Churches fear another elf attack. The Pope wants her group of Devils to deliver Alex to Troy so Alex can take the Throne and unite the two Churches to defeat the elves.

The Devils are presented in groups of two.

Vigga, the werewolf from Norway, and Brother Diaz, the reluctant monk. One is faithless and one is faithful, but they are attracted to each other like magnets.

Balthazar Sham Ivam Draxi, the necromancer, and Baptiste, the jack of all trades pirate. Both are fighting a mutual attraction and hatred for each other.

Jakob of Thorn, the ancient crusader cursed to never die, and Baron Rikard, the undead vampire cursed to requiring the blood of others. Both are searching for the end.

Sunny, the elf, and Alex the thief, the heir to the throne of Troy. Both outsiders and attracted to each other.

Recommendation

The Devils by Joe Abercrombie is a fun bloody humorous quest. Every Devil has an inner turmoil to conquer, and they are greater together than apart. Every Devil has their own point of view sections, so the reader sees their unique circumstances. The end of this novel sets up the next adventure of the Devils. I’m looking forward to reading the next two volumes of this proposed trilogy.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of The Devils by Joe Abercrombie, Book #1 of The Devils Series.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/212276037-the-devils

This is the link to my Book Review of Sharp Ends by Joe Abercrombie, an anthology. Will the protagonists in these thirteen fantasy action stories prevail or fail in their efforts?

This is the link to my Book Review of the Wisdom of Crowds by Joe Abercrombie, Age of Madness Series Book #3. They defeated the rebellion, but all is not well in the Union. Will the wisdom of crowds start a revolution and bring down the Union once and for all?

Writing Progress Report June 2025

This is my Writing Progress Report June 2025.

On May 28, we went to the AC/DC concert at Huntington Field in Cleveland, Ohio. Everyone was wearing light-up devil horns in honor of Angus Young. Great concert.

Writing Progress from May 2025.

I wrote four blog posts for my website, garydavidgillen.com. Including my writing progress report for May 2025, which I linked below.

In May 2025, I presented the short story named The Case of the Reluctant Pawnbroker to the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call.

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in May 2025.

In the past, I sent the stories, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, and Grognard to magazines.

The seven Flash Fiction Stories I sent out in 2020 and 2021 were Space-Dog Confession, Sleeping Sickness, Caliburnus, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, Wormhole Generator, Runs with Scissors, and Principled Rogue.

Magazine submissions for 2021 were 4 unique stories submitted 4 times, with 0 accepted, 0 pending, and 4 rejections. No submissions for 2022. None for 2023. None for 2024.

Events from May 2025.

No events in May.

Writing Goals for June 2025.

In June 2025, I plan to write four blog posts for garydavidgillen.com, including my Writing Progress Report for June 2025.

I plan to work on a story for the Advanced Fiction Writing Workshop on a Zoom call in June 2025.

Eventually, I plan to work on the third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. I plan to split Chapter 1 into two chapters and add a scene to the new Chapter 1.

Submit the stories Space-Dog Confession, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, and Caliburnus to other short fiction magazines.

Polish and send the stories White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

In June 2025, I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account.

Planned Events for June 2025.

The next conference I plan to attend is the Confluence Conference, held near Pittsburgh, PA, from July 25, 2025, to July 27, 2025. They will have the conference at the Sheraton Pittsburgh Airport Hotel in Coraopolis, PA. I attended the Confluence in 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, (2021 was cancelled due to COVID), 2022, 2023, and 2024.

The link to the Confluence website.

https://confluence-sff.org

Conference Recap Cleveland Concoction 2023

Conference Recap Cleveland Concoction 2023

Introduction

I attended the SF conference, Cleveland Concoction, at 600 North Aurora Road, Aurora, Ohio, at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 17 to 19, 2023. I attended Cleveland Concoction in 2017, 2018, 2019, 2023, 2024, and 2025. (2020, 2021, and 2022 were canceled due to COVID-19).I attended the opening ceremony, seven panels, three concerts, one performance, the state of the convention meeting, and the closing ceremonies.

The link to the Concoction website.

http://www.clevelandconcoction.org/

Concoction 2023 Banner

Cleveland Concoction 2023 Program Guide Cover

ConCoction 2023 Badge

Bertram Inn and Conference Center

Summary

Friday, March 17 at 2 PM

Mistakes Beginning Authors Make 1.0, a panel with Linda Robertson Reinhardt, Marcus V. Calvert, J. D. Blackrose, Joelle Presby, and Tory Gates.

Make what you are working on special.

Getting an agent isn’t the first thing you need to do. You need something ready to be published before you can look for an agent.

They suggest reading On Writing by Stephen King.

The panelists talked about Save the Cat by Blake Snyder, a book on writing screenplays that has applicability to writing novels.

They talked about the two writing approaches, Pantsers (or gardeners) and Outliners (or architects).

They held the panel in Hayes A Room with 8 attendees.

Friday, March 17 at 3 PM

Animal Sidekicks, a panel with Cassandra Morgan, Addie J. King, Olivia Berrier, James Fadeley, and David F. Balog.

In writing, animals become more than a pet.

Could be a secondary character or a sidekick.

Examples are Old Yeller, Cujo, John Wick’s dog, and Mad Max’s dog in Mad Max 2.

As an author, you must get inside the animal’s head to understand the animal first.

They talked about the sidekicks you’d like to see the most, and the most interesting answer was a gerbil.

They held the panel in Hayes A Room with 12 attendees.

Friday, March 17 at 5 PM

The Opening Ceremonies.

Eric Hogg, the con chair, started the ceremony.

The cosplay chair introduced the three cosplay guests of honor, Mogchelle, Knightmage, and Big Girl Little World.

They introduced The Harp Twins, the music Guests of Honor

The other chairs, including OPS, were introduced.

They held the ceremonies in the Pegasus Room with 40 attendees.

Friday, March 17 at 6 PM

A Concert by The Harp Twins

This was the first of three concerts they performed this weekend.

They played nine selections.

  1. Sweet Child of Mine by Guns ‘n Roses.
  2. The Daemon Lover (a Scottish Sea Chanty)
  3. Nothing Else Matters by Metallica
  4. The Hearse Song
  5. Don’t Fear the Reaper by Blue Öyster Cult
  6. Viking Song featuring the Volk Twins (drummers)
  7. Legend of the Shaders (an original Harp Twins song)
  8. The Game of Thrones Theme
  9. Paint It Black by the Rolling Stones

They held the concert in the Pegasus Room with 60 attendees.

Friday, March 17 at 8 PM

Flash Fiction, a panel with Olivia Berrier, Weston Kincaide, and Marie Vibbert.

Flash Fiction is a complete story of under 1000 words.

The story focuses on structure. It follows this structure; set-up, twist, then punch line.

Every word must be perfect.

An analogy might be that Facebook is like a short story and Twitter is like Flash.

The key is the twist where the ending changes the meaning of what came before.

The two biggest mistakes that writers make are having too much beginning and rushing the ending.

Use the Iceberg writing example. The writer describes a small part of the story, and the reader fills in the details with inference.

After the discussion the panelists each read aa flash fiction that they published.

Olivia Berrier read “Scales and Secrets.”

https://www.oliviaberrier.com

Marie Vibbert read “Things from our kitchen junk drawer that could save this spaceship.” It was first published in Daily Science Fiction, but is also on her website linked below.

Weston Kincade read “Knock, Knock.” It’s from his short story collection, Tales From the Box, linked below.

https://www.kincadefiction.com/

They held the panel in Hayes A Room with 7 attendees.

Saturday, March 18 at 10 AM

Mistakes Beginning Authors Make 2.0, a panel with Jason R. Lady, Marie Vibbert, James Fadeley, and Clif Flynt.

The discussion covered four parts.

  1. Craft Mistakes

A problem and a solution are needed for a complete story.

The problem leads to the tension being resolved. You need the right ending. Write your bad ending first and rewrite it until it fits.

Get the voice of the character as soon as possible.

Vary the length of your sentences, but 40 words in a sentence is too much.

Be consistent and mindful of your points of view, don’t head hop too much.

Be careful with tense, use past tense in the past and present tense in the present.

  • Business – the selling of the book.

Use your social network.

Strive for face-to-face contact.

Don’t include your life story in your cover letter. Keep it a simple, dry form letter.

  • Legal – Copyrights

Don’t put your fiction writing in your blog, because then you are only selling reprint rights.

Don’t use lyrics in a story unless you have permission or it is in the public domain.

A title cannot be copyrighted.

Red flags if there is a reading fee on a potential agent.

  • Final Thoughts

Get into a writing group.

Shake it up, do something different.

Finish your great ideas.

Keep writing, never stop.

They held the panel in Hayes A Room with 10 attendees.

Saturday, March 18 at 12 PM

Difficulties in Dating, a performance with The Confused Greenies.

The description was A Commedia dell ‘Arte of “Time Travel”

The performance was set on New Year’s Eve.

The main character is the bachelor type.

He travels through time to the future.

He wants to know about his future.

There are two suitors for his love interest, and her decision impacts the fate of the world.

The resolution is resolved unexpectedly.

They held the performance in the Pegasus Room with 12 attendees.

Saturday, March 18 at 1 PM

Star Maps and Alternate Earths, a panel with Andy Presby

The panel was about an overview of inexpensive tools for detailed SF/F world building for fans and writers.

  1. Celestia- space simulator.

https://celestiaproject.space

  • Google Earth – Worldwide satellite imagery

https://www.google.com/intl/en/earth/index.html

  • AstroSynthesis – Star Mapping System

https://www.nbos.com/products/astrosynthesis

  • Fractal Mapper – Mapping System

https://www.nbos.com/products/fractal-mapper

  • Blender – 3D Creation software

https://www.blender.org/

They held the panel in the Hayes C & D Room with 7 attendees.

Saturday, March 18 at 3:30 PM

A Concert by The Harp Twins

This was the second of three concerts they performed this weekend.

They played nine selections.

  1. A song by the Proclaimers
  2. The Twins and the Troll (an original Harp Twins song)
  3. Highway to Hell by AC/DC
  4. Death Vault (an original Harp Twins song)
  5. Fear of the Dark by Iron Maiden
  6. Viking Song featuring the Volk Twins (drummers)
  7. Nordic Solstice
  8. The Game of Thrones Theme
  9. Paint it Black by the Rolling Stones

They held the concert in the Pegasus Room with 110 attendees. (A Full House)

Saturday, March 18 at 7 PM

Quitting Your Day Job, a panel with J. D. Blackrose, Joelle Presby, Olivia Berrier, and Linda Robertson Reinhardt.

They talked about their background leading to writing for a living.

You have some power in knowing your followers by putting out newsletters, but not on Facebook and Twitter.

Remember that anything that works today will not work in the future, it changes constantly.

Word of mouth is the best advertisement ever.

Doing conventions generates 90 % of her sales.

They held the panel in Hayes A Room with 7 attendees.

Sunday, March 19 at 11 AM

A Concert by The Harp Twins

This was the third of three concerts they performed this weekend.

The first five songs were audience choice songs. The song in brackets is the one not chosen.

They played nine selections.

1. Dr, Who Theme [Theme of Fairy Tale]

2. Rhiannon by Fleetwood Mac [House of the Rising sun by The Animals]

  • Sweet Dreams by the Eurythmics [Sweet Child of Mine by Guns ‘n Roses]
  • Secret of the Sirens [Wolf Lullaby]
  • Dream On by Aerosmith [Clocks by Coldplay]
  • Viking Song featuring the Volk Twins (drummers)
  • Legend of the Shaders (an original Harp Twins song)
  • The Game of Thrones Theme
  • Paint it Black by the Rolling Stones

They held the concert in the Pegasus Room with 65 attendees.

Sunday, March 19 at 1 PM

The State of the Convention

Almost every convention head was there for the talk.

Many open volunteer positions.

There were about 250 people who attended the con this year.

They held the discussion in the Pegasus Room with 12 attendees.

Sunday, March 19 at 2 PM

Closing Ceremonies

Eric Hogg, the con chair, Stan Paulson from Security, and the person from Ops did a post-con talk.

They said they were working on planning for next year, with dates coming soon.

The Cosplay Guests of Honor and the Harp Twins were in the first row watching the talk.

The bottom line is that Concoction has risen from the dead following three years with no con due to COVID complications.

Looking forward to next year.

They held the ceremonies in the Hayes C&D room with 37 attendees.

Recommendation – Conclusion

Conference Recap Cleveland Concoction 2023

Cleveland Concoction 2023 was wonderful. The Bertram Conference center is nice. My stars of the con were the Harp Twins. I watched each of their three concerts at the con and each performance was great. It was interesting to see that the first half of each performance was different, and the second half was the same. My other highlights were the Confused Greenies performance and State of the Con panel. I attended the con in 2024 and 2025, and I plan on attending next year.

Links

I attended the SF conference, Cleveland Concoction, at 600 North Aurora Road, Aurora, Ohio, at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 7 to 9, 2025. I attended 11 activities. My star of the con was Marie Vibbert. The con returns in March 2026.

I attended the SF conference called Cleveland Concoction at 600 North Aurora Road Aurora, Ohio at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 8 to 10, 2024. I attended the opening ceremony, eight panels, two author showcases, and the closing ceremony. This year’s theme was the Neverending dungeon. My star of the con was Becca Lynn Mathis. The con returns from March 7 to March 9, 2025.

Links Continued

I attended the SF conference Cleveland Concoction 2019, at 600 North Aurora Road, Aurora, Ohio, at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 1 to 3, 2019. I attended the opening ceremony, four panels, and the closing ceremony. This is a link to my conference recap. I also volunteered in the Programming Department for four hours and in the ConSuite for four hours.

I attended the SF conference Cleveland Concoction at 600 North Aurora Road Aurora, Ohio at the Bertram Inn and Conference Center from March 9, 2018, to March 11, 2018. The 2019 convention was from March 1 to 3, 2019 and I realized as I was writing a recap for that conference, I had not posted a recap for the 2018 conference. This is a recap for the conference from last year. I attended the opening ceremony, five panels, two author showcases, a performance, and the closing ceremony. I also volunteered in the ConSuite for eight hours.

This is my recap for the SF conference Cleveland Concoction from 2017. They held it from March 10, 2017, to March 12, 2017. I attended nine activities and volunteered in the ConSuite for twelve hours.

When the Moon Hits Your Eye by John Scalzi

When the Moon Hits Your Eye by John Scalzi.

Introduction

In When the Moon Hits Your Eye by John Scalzi, the moon turns to cheese, and hijinks ensue. It’s as crazy and interesting as it sounds.

Summary

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Recommendation

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Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of When the Moon Hits Your Eye by John Scalzi.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/211659824-when-the-moon-hits-your-eye

Fuzzy Nation by John Scalzi is a reimagining of the novel Little Fuzzy by H. Beam Piper. Scalzi updates the story to contemporary sensibilities. Jack Holloway discovers a new species he calls Fuzzies. If they are determined to be sentient, then he and Zara Corp lose the right to exploit the planet. Will Jack choose to get filthy rich or protect the new species?

Zoe’s Tale by John Scalzi is the fourth book in the Old Man’s War series. This novel tells the events from the previous story, The Last Colony, from the point of view of Zoe Boutin Perry.

Last Colony by John Scalzi is the third book in the Old Man’s War series. John Perry and his family colonized a new planet. Can he protect the colony, or will the colony perish leading to the extermination of humanity?

Ghost Brigades by John Scalzi is the second book in the Old Man’s War series. Jared Dirac is a clone with another man’s memories. He must save humanity from three allied alien races determined to destroy humanity.

Old Man’s War is the first novel in the Old Man’s War series. This is the link to my review.